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Kissing Scene by Melonie Johnson

Break out the Chapstick and Mentos – it’s kissing scene time! Here’ s my entry in the Kissing Scene Competition, hosted by Cupid’s Literary Connection. The following is an excerpt from my paranormal romance, To Catch A Fetch.

A little background info to set the scene: Devyn Cartwright has been hired to do a photographic essay on a Victorian estate.  With her lust for period homes and furniture, Devyn  should be in heaven…but her lust for the home’s caretaker, Ronan Evans, is putting her through hell. Devyn tells herself Ronan is off-limits, and struggles to keep their relationship professional, going so far as to make a list of all the reasons why getting involved with Ronan would be a bad idea. But both Devyn’s reasons and her sense fly out the antique window when Ronan corners her and demands to know how she really feels about him.

 

“Devyn. Open your eyes and look at me. Please.”

She lifted her lashes, unable to resist the soft plea. His dark eyes searched her face for a moment. Then he smiled. A wicked, sexy, sinful smile that lit Devyn’s “Top Ten Reasons Why I Should Not Get Involved With Ronan” list on fire and left it in a pathetic pile of fluttering ashes.

“You want me, don’t you?”

Idiot man, he’s only figuring this out now? Devyn nodded. She wasn’t fooling him, and she certainly wasn’t fooling herself, so who was left to fool by denying the truth?

His smile widened at her assent, a hint of masculine satisfaction creasing the corners of his mouth. “That’s why you’ve been avoiding me, isn’t it.”

It wasn’t a question, but she nodded again anyway.

“Sweet, sexy, silly female,” he murmured, leaning closer. “Don’t you know what’s happening between us,” he paused and brushed his mouth against hers in a touch so feather-light, it barely registered as a kiss, “is unavoidable?”

Devyn whimpered at the feel of his mouth on hers. His words sank into her, loosening the knots she had tied around her emotions.

Ronan slid his hands around her waist, the rough, bare skin of his palms a shock of heat against her naked back as he lifted the hem of her shirt. For the space of a heartbeat, he rested his thumbs in the sensitive dip at the base of her spine. Then his fingers slipped lower, gliding over her lace covered bottom. He cupped her with his big strong hands and lifted her so she pressed against him, her lips on level with his.

 This time there was no mistaking the pressure of his lips. Ronan’s tongue, hot and sure in her mouth, burned a path of need through her like a shot of whiskey. The taste of him flooded her veins and buckled her knees.

Devyn gripped Ronan’s shoulders for support. Drunk on desire, she broke the kiss to whisper the one coherent thought her mind could conjure.

“More.”

 

 

A Kiss to Build A Dream On

That’s what tomorrow’s post is, really. I dream of landing a literary agent – the one who will be the perfect match for me and my novel(s). This Valentine’s Day, fate may smile upon me, and with a little help from a certain Cupid, my dream could come true.

Tomorrow morning I enter Cupid’s Literary Connection Kissing Contest. Over the next few days “kissing experts” will read the fifty or so kissing scenes entered in the contest and decide which scenes earn the following honorable mentions:

Sweetest kiss: Sugar Lips Award
Most embarrassing/funniest kiss: Color Me Red Award
Most intense/hottest kiss: Get A Room Award
Most romantic kiss: Swooning Award
Most lovable characters: Cutest Couple Award

Each of the ten judges will also award one entry the *Best overall writing: Write In The Kisser Award* – that’s the Golden Ticket that gets the writer admission into the second round, which takes place next week on CLC’s blog. Then on that most romantic of days, (no, not National Drink Wine day, that’s Feb 18th) the experts and Cupid herself will choose 3 favorites from the top 10.  Consider this prize a Platinum Ticket – which gets the three winning writers into the agent round of the Blind Speed Dating event happening at the end of the month.

And it all starts with a kiss…

Hope to see you here tomorrow!

Til then, here’s one of my favorite movie kisses:

Watts and Keith from Some Kind of Wonderful: The Kiss That Kills. I love this movie, I love this soundtrack, and I LOVE this kiss. When you see his fingers tighten on her hips…wow. Did it just get hotter in here?

My First Eight, And I’m Already Late

Ooops. Somehow I’ve managed to blow this before I even get started!

Lemme splain: last week I caught a tweet by writing buddy Shannyn Schroeder about signing up for something called 8SentenceSunday. Intrigued, I poked around to learn more. My poking  (more clicking, actually) led me to the Weekend Writing Warriors website – a fresh social sharing writers’ project that launches, well – today.

Inspired by Six Sentence Sunday (who recently closed their virtual doors), the concept is simple, each week you want to participate, you sign your website/blog up on their Linky List. Then, come Sunday, you post eight sentences from one of your manuscripts. Anything pretty much goes, as the admins of WeWriWa say, “post eight sentences from something you’ve written, or something you’re writing, published or unpublished.” The only thing is it must be your own writing, and you must stick to only 8 sentences.

Oh, and there’s one other thing – you must post your sentences by 9am Sunday morning. And this is the part I screwed up.  Today was one of those rare, glorious Sundays I actually stayed in bed til 9! (Well, I was up at 5:45 am to let the dog out, but I got to go back to bed – and stay there for more than five seconds – which is what counts.)

So here I am, late to the party, but promising to be on time next week. (I’ll just tell myself I have to have my “8 posted by 8.” It will be like setting my alarm clock earlier than I need to) Actually, it won’t be early, as the 9am requirement is in Eastern time…so I DO need to get ‘er done and up by 8. Thank goodness I have a dog who needs to pee before the crack of dawn.

The following eight are from my paranormal romance, To Catch A Fetch. Ghost hunter Ronan Evans is supposed to be working on convincing Devyn Cartwright – a woman with the ability to see ghosts – to join his team of supernatural researchers. Problem is, all he wants to do is convince Devyn to get in his bed. When fellow team member Claudia shows up to check on his progress, she calls him out for his lack of focus:

 

The smile disappeared and Claudia tapped her chin with a scarlet-tipped finger, the same shade as her lips.

Did women buy their make-up to match the same as they did with their bras and panties? Ronan had no idea where that errant thought came from, but once in his brain, all he could think about was the creamy lace of Devyn’s panties as he slipped one finger under the soft fabric to feel the softer skin beneath. He recalled the feel of her bra through her sweater, and his mouth went dry as he imagined the same pale shade of lace cupping her breasts.

Claudia kicked him in the shin. “Come back to earth, buddy.”

He blinked. “Am I that easy to read?”

 

Feel free to comment with your opinions and suggestions…and if you are interested in checking out what the other 50 or so writers participating today have posted, their links are available HERE.

Friday Fast Five: A Kissing Contest, A Cowboy Giveaway, Book Blogs, and Did You Know I Married a Loser?

It’s February 1st, people! January 2013 finally took its drunk ass home. (Seriously) To celebrate, I’m posting the first Friday Fast Five of the Year!

1. Pucker Up: I entered a kissing contest! Not one of those “how long can your lips stay locked together contests” you only see in cheesy gum commercials from the 80’s, but a literary contest, in which I submit a kissing scene (don’t worry, the entry is limited to 350 words, so things won’t get too steamy). What’s up for grabs? A slot in Cupid’s Literary Connection Blind Speed Dating Event, which aims (ha! Cupid, arrow, “aims”) to match writers and agents. To enter the kissing contest, first you needed to enter a Speed Dating “Bouncer” Round (your query and 1st 250 words of your manuscript)…I’m in Bouncer Round 5, which doesn’t go live until Feb 11th, so I have no idea yet if I’m in like Flynn – either way, I’d have entered the kissing contest since I love kissing scenes! Do you? Get the information about the kissing contest and a list of all the blogs participating HERE and be sure to swing back by my site on Monday for some lip action…I’d love to hear what you think. Oh, and just for kicks, check out this silly (and a bit bizarre) kissing scene from a Mentos Commercial:

 

2. Cowboy Giveaway: Sorry but no, you don’t have a chance to win your own cowboy (I’m not sure that’s legal) but you do have a chance to win a Simple Touch Nook, loaded with hot cowboy romance from author Sarah M. Anderson! Sarah is currently on a blog tour, promoting the launch of her two latest releases: Mystic Cowboy and A Real Cowboy. For more information on how to enter, visit Sarah’s blog tour page. You’ll want to stop by and say hi simply for the eye candy…Rebel, the hero of Mystic Cowboy totally frosts my cupcake. In fact, I’m going to add him to my eye candy Pinterest page now.

3. Lose Yourself in A Book: While winning stuff is awesome, it can also be totally wonderful to lose yourself – in that good way that happens when you are caught up in a great book. You know the feeling:  Who needs to take a shower, get dressed, or feed the kids? This book is too good to put down! To celebrate the books that get us to that special place, two of my fellow writers and friends started a blog called Land of Lost Books. It’s a book review site, but unique in that it doesn’t focus on new releases – or stay within a specific genre. Revisit old favorites like Anne of Green Gables and the Witch of Blackbird Pond. Or check out something that might not be on your usual radar, like The Siren by Tiffany Reisz.Pour a cup of coffee and settle in for awhile, surfing the Land of Lost Books is like being a part of an eclectic book club! Be sure to join in the discussion too, every time you comment on a post, you are entered in their monthly drawing for a $10 gift card to Amazon or B&N!

4. A Bitchin’ Anniversary: While my friends’ blog is still a baby, not even 1 yet – one of my favorite book review sites is turning 8! Smart Bitches Trashy Books has built quite a name in the book blogging world, and while I first discovered them thanks to some witty cover snark, I stayed for the honesty of their reviews. As the SB site says, “All of the romance, none of the bullshit.” I know when SB Sarah says something is good, the book is a pretty safe bet for my money. Likewise, she won’t just say a book sucks, she’ll explain in intelligent detail why it blows. To celebrate their 8th year in the blog-o-verse, SBTB is hosting a giveaway! To enter, just leave a comment on their Happy 8th Anniversary post explaining your favorite thing about reading romance.

Yours Truly with SB Sarah at her signing for Everything I Know About Love…

5. I Married A Loser: So, speaking of anniversaries, I thought it was time to tell everyone something about my husband. But first, let me say that he IS NOT a loser–and I never thought of him that way. He, however, seems to feel different, as he titled his book: My Loser Phase. Yes, you read that right, I am the one writing madly, working on my synopsis, perfecting my query letter…and the husband publishes a book first. The book is a collection of stories about his time spent working retail in the 90’s. If you are a fan of video games, if you were ever a mall rat…or if you like coming of age stories where a person finds his motivation to grow the hell up, then I think you will enjoy his book. WARNING: shameless spouse plug ahead:  You can buy the book HERE on Amazon for less than a buck. Oh, and if you enjoy reminiscing about the good old days of gaming (ie: the 80’s & 90’s) you’ll want to check out his podcast, The Retro League.

Bringing the Disney Magic to the JustDance Series

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Poke around on my blog a bit, and you’ll know two things for sure: my family loves the JustDance games and Disney stuff. So as you can imagine, we were thrilled to get a chance to play and review the JustDance Disney Party game…two things we love rolled into one!

The game playing had to wait a bit, since it arrived in the mail only a day before we headed out to…you guessed it – DisneyWorld! While there we did plenty of real dancing…

with a lovely Indian dancer in Animal Kingdom…
with Stitch in Tomorrowland…
with Frozone in a parade…

 

and of course, a dance with Prince Charming.

Once home, it was fun to keep the Disney-vibe going…Lil’ G couldn’t wait to fire up the game and play. As expected, her initial favorite song picks centered around her favorite characters: Stitch, Cinderella, Rapunzel, Phineas & Ferb…but as we played more she started to explore other songs, and found some new favorites!

What we liked…

Like buying a pair of Mickey Ears, Lil’ G enjoyed getting to pick her icon (although, 9 times out of 10, she chose Stitch).

There are 4 game modes to choose from, including two options that are much more “Mini” friendly – in that they are easier for younger players to score points and earn stars.

Lil’ G always picked the “Freeze and Shake” mode. I can understand why, with simple easy to follow instructions to “shake” and “stop,” she could rack up the points and earn as many stars as her big sister!

With 25 songs to choose from, you get a nice variety to keep almost everybody happy…for my older daughter, there are songs from the tweeny Disney shows like Shake It Up, Good Luck Charlie, and a family favorite – Wizards of Waverly Place. For the boys, there are songs from Phineas and Ferb (Squirrels in My Pants anyone?) and the Jungle Book.

Though even the boys can enjoy a little “Bibbidi Bobbidi Boo.”

What we didn’t like…

Sure, 25 songs is a lot…but of course there are plenty of songs I would have loved to see on the list…I’m not sure if there will be an option to buy new songs with Wii points like you can with other JustDance games, but hope this option becomes available.

Overall, the graphics and play-ability didn’t seem up to par with the other JustDance games – I wonder if that is because the Disney version is marketed to younger children who may not notice or care about the finer details.

If you choose to play song by song a la carte, you will need to continually select all the little options like you ears icon, the language preference, the male/female dance preference, etc. It’s a lot of extra steps each time you want to play another song, and can get tedious quickly. There is a playlist option, which I haven’t tried yet…I’m hoping once I set one up, it will eliminate the need to re-select choices between each dance.

Overall this game is a winner in our house – Lil’ G brought it along on a playdate and it kept the kids moving and grooving for quite some time.

If you want to bring some musical Disney magic home too, you can find JustDance DisneyParty on Amazon (where it’s on sale for $20!) It’s also available at ToysRUs. For more info about the game, including a complete list of song titles, check out the official Ubisoft Just Dance Disney Party Page.

 

Pop-What-ica?

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The gift-giving season is upon us! Hard to believe, but it was almost a decade ago that I got to buy and wrap Christmas presents for my baby girl for the very first time. Back then, the choices were simple. I could walk into a toy store, hit the baby aisle, and come home with piles of toys. Of course, I always had my eye out for the “educational” toys – you know, the kind that promised to stimulate brain development and enhance cognitive skills, etc.  Whether the ball popper or lavender-scented octopus stimulated my daughter’s brain, I’m not sure – but she seemed to enjoy them and I felt like I had done my job as both a smart and fun mama.

Now my baby is 9 years old and present buying has become more challenging. She owns, like many children of her generation, a Nintendo DS, so of course games for the system is an obvious gift idea. Again though, there is that challenge every mother faces:  to buy gifts that both entertain and educate.  If my child is going to spend hours playing a video game, I want to be able to assuage my conscience by knowing she’s learning something while doing it.

UbiSoft’s new Poptropica game checks  all the boxes on my  “Smart-Mama” and “Fun-Mama” Christmas shopping wish list.  Pop-what-ica? You might ask…well, I did too. If (like me) you didn’t know, Poptropica is a virtual world – an on-line role playing game world created by Jeff Kinney.  (If that name sounds familiar, fellow parents of 9 year olds, it should – he’s the author of the Diary of a Wimpy Kid series.)  A DS game based on a popular virtual world from the guy who writes the Diary of a Wimpy Kid books? You’re sold already, right? Do I really need to even finish this review?

Well, in case you need to hear more…I’ll let the nine year old do the talking from here:

If the squeals of excitement and hours spent holed up in her room are any indication, then Miss A really enjoyed this game. One thing she loves to do is design her own avatars, and Poptropica provides lots of opportunities to create and customize characters.  I think players could spend hours and hours on this aspect of the game alone! (As you see in the beginning of the video, when she takes several moments to decide on a character to play, so many choices…)

And if that STILL isn’t enough to convince you, read more about the game on the official Poptropica Video Game Adventure site.

I hope, as the pre-holiday shopping days dwindle, I’ve helped make things easier by giving you a great gift idea. Poptropica is available at Toys R Us and Amazon. For less than $30, you’ll keep your child entertained, provide a smidgen of conscience-appeasing education, and buy yourself hours of quiet time. What a bargain!

 

 

Holiday Trees at Disney World: Wilderness Lodge

This December I got to do something I’ve long wanted to do…I got to spend part of the most wonderful time of the year in the most magical place on earth. Yep, I’m talking Christmastime at Disney World.

Ever since my family got back from our first trip to Disney World three years ago, I’ve known I wanted to come for a visit during the winter holidays. Yes, Disney is magical any time of the year…but an extra sprinkle of wonder gets added during Christmas.  And while I knew when I wanted to go on our next Disney vacation, I was less sure of where I wanted to stay. I knew I wanted a resort closer to the Magic Kingdom – the husband had his eye on the Contemporary, and I…being a little more price-conscious, was considering the Port Orleans Riverside resort.

It was our travel agent, Lori Bandera of SmallWorld Vacations (who we used to help plan our first trip in 2009), who suggested the Wilderness Lodge to me. It hadn’t even been on my radar for consideration, but I did some quick research on the web, and once I saw a few pictures of what the resort looked like during Christmas…

from the immense fireplace…
to the cabin in the North woods atmosphere…
to the amazing, show-stopping Christmas tree that fills their lobby…

 I was SOLD.

The tree soars into the rafters of the lobby, and you can’t help but stare up at it in wonder.

 

I’ll talk more about the resort itself later, but for now, let me just say if you are considering a trip to Disney World during Christmas, the Wilderness Lodge is the hotel to book…even Minnie approves.

Why Ghosts?

So I’ve been rambling on quite a bit lately about this writing thing…and I thought today, as 15 agents prepare to go to war with each other over the first 250 words of 60 aspiring authors (mine included)…that instead of talking about how I write, I’d focus on what I write…and why I write it.

And at the moment, I write paranormal romance. I’m not sure if this category of books had its own place on the shelf 20 years ago…but stroll through a bookstore now (if you are lucky enough to live near one, they are approaching dinosaur status and I mourn each one as it passes) and walking through the paranormal section could take a while. It’s big – and packed with everything from vampires to werewolves, angels to demons, dragons to centaurs (yes, centaurs…or so I’ve heard). This is also where you’ll find the books involving psychic powers, paranormal abilities…and ghosts. And that’s where my book would be found.

So why ghosts? Well, I find it a fascinating subject. Bring up the topic of ghosts at a dinner party and everyone has an opinion: some don’t believe, some aren’t sure but wonder, and some have several stories of their personal ghostly encounters.

Ghost stories tickle that spot of curiosity in me…and give me a supernatural thrill. I remember when I was in grade school I read a book about a girl who is haunted by a dollhouse. The dolls keep re-arranging themselves…I still get chills thinking of the main character hearing the scratching noises of the dolls moving around at night. I don’t want to spoil the ending – so I’ll just say the dolls’ ghostly activities lead to solving an old mystery.

As an adult, I got a thrill from another ghost – of a Scottish Highlander spotted on a dark country lane, staring up at the window of a woman brushing her hair. If you’ve read Outlander by Diana Gabaldon, then you might remember this scene. It is quick, and happens early in the book – but that ghostly encounter struck a chord in me…and led me to devour all the books in the series (All 7 of them – with number 8 coming out early next year). Gabaldon is a master storyteller, and her novels are phenomenal…but when it comes down to it, I keep reading because she has promised to one day explain the “why” of this ghost scene…and I hold on – hooked by my desire to see her connect the paranormal dots.

Despite the fact I love a good ghost story, I did not set out to write one of my own…it just sort of happened. One day I sat down for a free writing session and a scene popped into my head – fully formed and crystal clear. A man and a woman were sitting in a Victorian parlor of some kind but were dressed in modern clothes. The man was trying to explain to the woman that he was a ghost hunter, and she wasn’t buying it.

“I’m not joking Devyn.” Ronan’s voice was cold. Not cruel, just devoid of any emotion.
“Yeah, I get it. You’re for real. A real live, walking talking ghost buster. Ok, ok. So, do you like have some kind of laser thing that traps little green guys who terrorize hotel guests?”
His left eyebrow lifted quizzically.
“You know, a ghost buster. You catch ghosts in some kind of metal trap, using…I don’t know, electro-magnetic energy or something.”
His right eyebrow rose to join the left.

Not every scene in the book came to me this easily…far from it – but the bones of the story developed organically from this first conversation.

One other element of my story that came like lightning out of the sky was my title.  But in this case I was able to do a little detective work to figure out how my sub-conscious managed to come up with To Catch A Fetch . It has a familiar ring to it, for one…an echo of another title – but my story is not remotely similar to the Hitchcock film or the book it was based on.  The other piece pf the puzzle popped into place when I was watching an old episode of X-Files, in which a series of ghosts haunt an autistic man. At one point in the episode Mulder refers to a ghost as a “fetch. ” Scully, the constant skeptic, is given some food for thought when she has her own ghostly encounter (in a chill-worthy scene!). If you haven’t seen the episode, boot up the Netflix and check it out. I call it the “She is Me” episode, but it is actually titled, “Elegy.” (Season 4, episode 22).

And that’s why I write ghost stories. Some may question why I write paranormal romance at all –  it is seen as a dying breed, a genre past its prime…paranormal writers new to the scene have no hope of selling a book in a saturated market, blah blah blah.  Well, I’ll tell you – I write paranormal romance because I follow the old rule: write what you want to read. I write about what fascinates me, what intrigues me…and what I’d like to find on a shelf  while strolling down the bookstore aisles.

The Follow Up Tap Dance and A Bit of Begging

Nearly a month ago I got out my horn a did a boot of tooting…my novel had won first place in a contest! Go me! Toot-toot! It was exciting and felt good because, well – winning always feels good. Also, it was that whole Sally Field thing: “I can’t deny the fact that you like me, right now you like me!” (Only in this case it was “They like my writing! They really like my writing!)

Well, here is my follow-up tap dance. I got a lovely plaque (Accolades – yesss!) And of course I have to post a picture. What else is the internet for if not to proclaim your awesomeness to the world? Oh, right…all the p0rn. Anyway, here is a pic of the plaque, it’s not pornographic, but I suppose you could use your imagination. (Also – there were a lot of p’s in that last sentence).

And now I’ll take my bow…and do some begging. My good fortune has continued, and my novel was selected to take part in the 2012 Baker’s Dozen Agent Auction hosted by the anonymous Authoress who blogs under the title Miss Snark’s First Victim . Out of 400 plus entries, To Catch A Fetch was one of 60 to be selected (25 adult, 35 middle-grade/young adult). If you are curious to see what a story looks like in the pre-published stage, or if you want to know what agents find in their slush piles, then take a read through the entries. All 60 went live this morning. You can read and comment on them through the morning of December 4th. After that, the REAL fun begins, when the 15 participating agents have 24 hours to bid for pages.

Or…if you just want to be nice to me, because my begging has made you pity me – I’m good with that. My entry is number 10, you can read it HERE. Comments are most welcome. Of course I want you to be honest, but if words like: “Brilliant!” “Amazing!” or “I HAVE to read the rest, I can’t wait until it’s published!” happen to pour from your keyboard, I promise I won’t mind.

A Break from Christmatizing

It’s the final day of Thanksgiving weekend and some leftovers are still in the fridge, I’m still in my pajamas, and there are Christmas storage boxes still on the floor…all over the floor. I am a staunch supporter of waiting until after Thanksgiving to begin decorating for Christmas – but I also like to get the tree trimmed and the house holiday-ed before CyberMonday. (Which I shop much more avidly than Black Friday, no pushy people in Santa sweatshirts to bring out my inner Grinch.)

So I’m Christmatizing the house…and I pretty much mean the whole house. From the traditional family tree in the living room to the StarWars tree in what used to be my dining room, to the purple and Tiffany-blue trees in my daughters’ rooms – there’s a whole lotta trimming going on.

This fine Sunday morning I took a break from the decorating to make some Christmas cards. Shutterfly had a great deal of 10 free cards (ends tonight, btw) and since I missed out on their free calendar deal that ended on Friday (still annoyed at myself for that), I figured I’d better order the cards now or be mad at myself tonight.

My favorite Christmas Song is Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas (for other favorites, see my TOP 10 page). Hence, the inspiration for the card. Here’s the results, if you’re not lucky enough to get one in the mail, at least you can enjoy it via the magic of the internets!

5×7 Folded Card
View the entire collection of cards.